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Petey's Pipeline E-zine

Issue #9

October 9, 2003


Contents

Business First Editorial Friday Surprise!
Guest Writer, Not Ghostwriter Ginger Geracitano How to Write Articles that Create Credibility
Random Ramblings and Miscellaneous Musings Modern-day Gold Rush
Write Thinking Dumbing Down in a High-tech World
Preview of coming distractions The fortuneteller's predictions

Business First (Editorial)

Friday Surprise!
by Phil Hanson

Despite having submitted the Perfect Text Web site to the Google search engine early this year, it wasn't until June that Google would admit that Perfect Text (the Web site) even existed. Alta Vista and Lycos didn't have any problems, but Google was a no-show.

By the time August rolled around, results for various search terms showed marked improvement. "Perfect Text" ranked #1 on Google (as would be expected for a specific Web site search), "Phil Hanson" came up #13 and #14 and a focused keyword search placed Perfect Text on page 5.

Soon after, I took down the article archives page (and all the articles associated with it) while I made some changes. With the exception of "Perfect Text," all my previous search results disappeared without a trace.

Last Wednesday, I again uploaded the archive page, and all of the articles, to my domain. Friday, when I did my weekly keyword search, Google gave me a big surprise. A Google search for my main keyword phrase and four primary keywords turned up the following results: #1 Perfect Text, #2 Perfect Text, #8 (via a link partner's link) Perfect Text. Not bad, for an amateur, eh?

My point, however, is not to gloat or to brag, but to show you that if I can do it, anyone can do it. All it takes is patience, persistence, hard work and lots and lots of focused, relevant content.

Google! Sometimes, you just gotta love it.

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In the latest issue of The Naked Truth Newsletter, Mark Ungvarsky tells us about the IBM/Factiva joint venture using IBM's "WebFountain" aggregator. It's a search engine designed to analyze the meaning of on-line text. Maybe my article Rationale for Success—and Survival isn't as far-fetched as some people think.

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Ginger Geracitano returns with another article for Guest Writer, Not Ghostwriter! This time, it's about how to write articles that create credibility. We like Ginger's articles. So much, in fact, that we're going to ask her if she'll let us store some of them in the Perfect Text Article Archives.

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Write Thinking takes more potshots at the pretenders. Don't miss it!

Copyright © 2003 by Phil Hanson

Guest Writer, Not Ghostwriter

Web site designer, marketing coach, writer and publisher Ginger Geracitano delivers another well-conceived article—this one aimed at helping you write well-conceived articles. Ginger brings you help, not hype, so pay attention.

How to Write Articles That Create Credibility
by Ginger Geracitano

There are many articles floating around the 'Net that tell you that writing articles is the best way to create credibility for yourself and become an expert in the eyes of your readers. I plan to bring this one step further by helping you to ensure that the articles you write actually achieve this goal!

You see, as an e-zine publisher and professional training coordinator responsible for providing helpful training tutorials to a membership of over 104,000 members, I've been receiving a lot of articles that tell you what to do without telling you why.

I think, perhaps, these particular authors have taken the entire "become the expert" a little too literally. It's great to reveal 'secrets' and share methods of success, but when you simply tell your readers to do something I'm afraid you come off as pompous, rather than as an expert.

Wouldn't you prefer to be the person that relays the type of information that finally makes that "light bulb" over your reader's head turn on when they learn something new?

Consider this: are you telling your readers why they should do what you're telling them to do, or are you simply laying out rules?

Why should we do what you tell us to do?

More importantly, how do we do what you're telling us to do?

To avoid sounding like a dictator, and to actually provide the help that your readers need, use this checklist before considering your article ready for print:

1) Have you created trust with the reader by providing the background that makes you credible? Have you shared your own experiences, and communicated your reasons for believing that your methods work?

2) Have you provided examples of the things you're telling them to do, or examples of what you're telling them works?

3) Have you explained your methods in everyday language, leaving out the technical jargon?

4) Have you tested each statement of instruction against the "how to" rule? (Explained below)

Remembering that when we are writing articles to communicate helpful and useful information, we have to make sure that what we write actually does help!

The best advice I ever received regarding article writing was from another publisher that I respect. I had sent a new article to her, and asked for feedback. She told me that my article was good, but that it could be great if only I shared useful resources that backed up what I was saying!

You know what? She was absolutely right! When we write articles, just like anything else we do in marketing, we must identify our audience and write to them, specifically. One of my favorite tests of relevancy is to have non-marketing friends read an article. I then ask them if they think I've provided useful "how to" material.

Using the checklist above is a good start toward evaluating the usefulness of your articles. The last bit of advice I have is something I call the "how to" rule.

To test your article with the "how to" rule, simply look at each statement of instruction you make within your article. Statements of instruction usually require your reader to do something:

"Use Powerful Headlines"
"Create Credibility"
"Build Trust"
"Establish A Need"

Once you've identified your statements of instruction, simply identify whether or not you've provided examples, or "how to" details. If you haven't, I advise you to re-work that section of your article in such a way as to explain your meaning to your readers.

Using the examples above:

"Use Powerful Headlines"
(Provide examples of powerful headlines, and why they are powerful.)

"Create Credibility"
(Explain at least one way to create credibility, and why it's important to do so.)

"Build Trust"
(Give examples of trust building, and how to implement them.)

"Establish A Need"
(Share the reasons, and how to do it!)

Explaining the "why" behind your instructions and methods is often the difference between an article that leaves your readers with questions, and one that actually provides them with the help they were hoping for when they started reading!

Establish credibility with your reader by becoming the person that finally explains the why and how of a situation. Be remembered for helping to "turn on the light bulb"!


Copyright © 2002–2003 by Ginger Geracitano
Used by permission.

Random Ramblings & Miscellaneous Musings

In part one of this series, we examined how shakeouts took their toll on smokestack economy businesses, citing examples from the trucking industry to prove our point. In part two, we showed you how, and why, the same causes are affecting on-line businesses in the same way. Part three began an analysis of how saturation and competition are affecting 'Netrepreneurs in the on-line marketplace. Part four, in the form of a parable, demonstrated how competition and saturation affect businesses and markets. Our fifth, and final, article in this series shows you that history does, indeed, repeat itself. Oh, yes! Today's Internet winners and losers are using the same philosophies and strategies the forty-niners used.

Modern-day Gold Rush
by Phil Hanson

When James Marshall discovered gold at Sutter's Mill in 1848, the gold rush was on. Hardy prospectors flocked to California in droves (some 50,000 by 1849), hoping to make a fortune. History shows that some of them did, indeed, make fortunes digging and panning for gold. It also shows that many more did not. So much, then, for the "something-for-nothing" crowd.

At the same time, another breed of entrepreneurs operated not far away. These were the provisioners—the people who kept the miners supplied with much of their food, tools and equipment and, of course, whiskey and entertainment—who became rich because they recognized a need and fulfilled it. The gold flowed out of the ground, through the miners' fingers and into the pockets of the merchant class. Most people who offered essential goods and services became wealthy while most people who came for the "easy" money did not.

A modern-day gold rush!

Today, technology is redefining the economy and changing the way people, and companies, do business. This phenomenon is not confined within national borders but is taking place on a global scale.

As a new economic era unfolds, the rules that governed the old one must be rewritten; businesses, governments and the many social institutions that are so essential to an orderly, productive society must be revamped if they are to be effective in the emerging information-based economy.

Employment opportunities (available jobs) are not keeping pace with population growth. At a time when population numbers are increasing, the number of jobs (relative to the total population) is decreasing. This does not bode well for a healthy, vibrant economy.

As more people are excluded from participation in the economy (unemployed people tend to conserve, to make do with what they have, to do without or to buy used goods rather than new), more businesses will feel the pinch of lagging sales. They, too, will initiate rounds of layoffs as they attempt to prop up their sagging bottom lines. Of course, the results will be more of the same.

Because mechanization, robotization and automation have eliminated many jobs and companies faced with declining profits have eliminated many more, increasing numbers of people are turning to the Internet to seek out, or eke out, a living. What we are witnessing today amounts to a modern-day gold rush.

While there are, at present, numerous opportunities available to people wanting to start on-line businesses, the window of opportunity may be about to slam shut. The market is saturated with people who want to teach people how to teach people to teach people how to do business on the Internet. The real power of the Internet is being ignored in the frenzy to obtain instant wealth.

The gold rush venue may have changed, but the principles involved have not. What was true more than 150 years ago is also true today. If you provide practical tools, helpful resources, valuable information or quality products or services—anything that people can use to improve their lives or their businesses—customers will beat a path to your virtual door.

There are still those who succumb to the lure and temptation of easy riches and a vast majority of them will rendezvous with bitter disappointment. Their on-line businesses are only temporary; soon, they will join the many thousands of others that have already been shaken out of the Web.

It is honest, ethical, conscientious and enterprising business people who have learned the value of integrity and hard work that will tell the real Internet success stories. All the others are merely the unwitting victims of the Internet business shakeout.

Copyright © 2003 by Phil Hanson
All rights reserved.

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Write Thinking

Dumbing Down in a High-tech World
by Phil Hanson

Web writers are—for the most part—an incompetent lot. People who can't write publish newsletters in which they tell other people who can't write that writing skill is unimportant. In the next sentence they complain that no one likes to read on-line, anyway.

Well, duh! They've taken a hip-shot and nailed the truth square between the running lights. The problem is they're dealing with self-fulfilling prophecy and don't even know it.

Do you think, maybe, it could be that people don't like to read on-line because they find so little that's worth reading? Web page text that's corrupted by flawed information, misspelled words, misused or misplaced punctuation, and grammatical, structural and formatting errors doesn't exactly inspire confidence or credibility. No wonder, then, that Web surfers hurry to click away to the next site.

When I'm faced with bad writing on-line, I won't waste my time with it. I move along to the next site with nary a backward glance, or a second thought. However, when I encounter good writing that delivers a worthwhile message, I cheerfully dedicate as much time as it takes to read it. I suspect that's true for many people.

Just as publishing for traditional print media underwent an evolutionary process in which publishers adopted uniform typographical standards and style conventions, so, too, will publishing for the Internet. Never forget that the standard for writing has always tended toward excellence, and that those who didn't make the cut fell by the wayside.

No writers, editors or publishers in any medium have ever had more powerful writing tools at their disposal than those of us who write, edit or publish for on-line consumption. As writers, editors and publishers, it's our responsibility to use those tools efficiently, effectively and wisely.

Thanks to technology, writing has never been simpler. But, if the quality of writing one typically encounters on the Internet is a reliable indicator, neither have the people who write.

Copyright © 2003 by Phil Hanson
All rights reserved.

Preview of Coming Distractions

Rats! The ol' crystal ball really fizzled this time—a total blackout. Guess we'll all have to wait 'til October 23 to see what shows up in issue #10. In the meantime, we'll try to get our orb-shaped oracle rebooted and back on-line in time to predict the contents of issue #11.

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